tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5420614271737977228.post6219161631020515654..comments2023-11-03T08:36:30.423-04:00Comments on C-Rod's English Classes: Extra Credit - Chapters 9 & 10Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger33125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5420614271737977228.post-37930063105496259972009-02-19T15:57:00.000-05:002009-02-19T15:57:00.000-05:00Metaphor and Imagerypg 168"All four of us turned i...Metaphor and Imagery<BR/><BR/>pg 168<BR/><BR/>"All four of us turned into water nymphs and danced around the cool spray, just the way it must have been when Indians danced circles around blazing fire."<BR/><BR/>It's a metaphor because Lily is comparing an Indian dance ritual around the bon fire, to what they are doing currently without using "like" or "as".<BR/>It's also imagery because you can visualize their actions around the sprinklers.Aileenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14114084838972047011noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5420614271737977228.post-49834249235132971412009-02-19T15:54:00.000-05:002009-02-19T15:54:00.000-05:00This comment has been removed by the author.Aileenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14114084838972047011noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5420614271737977228.post-28767115666335854752009-02-18T23:06:00.000-05:002009-02-18T23:06:00.000-05:00I climed into the honey wagon with my hair uncomed...I climed into the honey wagon with my hair uncomed, with may handing me buttered toast and orange juice through the window and Rosallen sticking in thermoses of water, both of them practically running alongside the truck while August rolled ou of the driveway.<BR/><BR/><BR/>Alliteration beacuse of the many words that start with "H" or "W" - which ever sounds best. :)<BR/><BR/>Stephanie Period 6Stephanie Reyeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01415456891008248956noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5420614271737977228.post-19395567846978637752009-02-18T22:31:00.000-05:002009-02-18T22:31:00.000-05:00Regina Fleming Period 6Similie"A night bird was si...Regina Fleming <BR/>Period 6<BR/><BR/>Similie<BR/><BR/>"A night bird was singing from a tree branch, just singing its heart out, urgent and feverish, like it was put there to sing the moon up to the top of the sky. Pg 189<BR/><BR/><BR/>or Personification<BR/>"I sat in the kitchen with August, June, and Rosaleen while the night spread out around the house." pg 188Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08385899436618250296noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5420614271737977228.post-74763785131680985282009-02-18T22:13:00.000-05:002009-02-18T22:13:00.000-05:00Belinda Per.6Simile"Driving back into remote corne...Belinda Per.6<BR/><BR/>Simile<BR/><BR/>"Driving back into remote corners of the woods where there were barely roads, we would come upon twenty-five beehives up on slats like a little lost city tucked back in there."Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5420614271737977228.post-42104548109383455482009-02-18T19:27:00.000-05:002009-02-18T19:27:00.000-05:00SimiliePage 165"I'd tried to imagine people crounc...Similie<BR/><BR/>Page 165<BR/><BR/>"I'd tried to imagine people crounched inside, bobbing along peacefully like a rubber duck in a child's bathtub..."<BR/><BR/>She's comparing the people to rubber ducks using the word "like"<BR/><BR/>Claudia S period 3freakshow3332https://www.blogger.com/profile/04732845413817362113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5420614271737977228.post-29564401795480663062009-02-18T19:06:00.000-05:002009-02-18T19:06:00.000-05:00"when they laid her down on the bank, water gushed..."when they laid her down on the bank, water gushed from her mouth and nostrils. I thought, This is the way Our Lady came washing up on the river near Charleston. I thought, Look at her fingers, her hands. They are so precious."<BR/><BR/>pg.193; Imagery<BR/><BR/>j.Mendez, p.1Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5420614271737977228.post-75645997315344337732009-02-18T12:22:00.001-05:002009-02-18T12:22:00.001-05:00Metaphor: Death is nothing but a doorwayKaitlynn!P...Metaphor: Death is nothing but a doorway<BR/><BR/>Kaitlynn!<BR/>Period 6!Kaitlynn G.https://www.blogger.com/profile/08741463511843291727noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5420614271737977228.post-19469200760260807002009-02-18T12:22:00.000-05:002009-02-18T12:22:00.000-05:00This comment has been removed by the author.Kaitlynn G.https://www.blogger.com/profile/08741463511843291727noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5420614271737977228.post-83588182721230938182009-02-18T12:16:00.000-05:002009-02-18T12:16:00.000-05:00This comment has been removed by the author.Kaitlynn G.https://www.blogger.com/profile/08741463511843291727noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5420614271737977228.post-17867471823200734962009-02-18T10:57:00.000-05:002009-02-18T10:57:00.000-05:00Chapter 10PersonificationThat night, in my bed, wh...Chapter 10<BR/><BR/>Personification<BR/><BR/>That night, in my bed, when I closedc my eyes, bee hum ran through my body.<BR/><BR/>**Michael Lezcano<BR/>**Period 1♠Naomi♠https://www.blogger.com/profile/13977544434749878625noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5420614271737977228.post-25018708432409410722009-02-18T10:53:00.000-05:002009-02-18T10:53:00.000-05:00This comment has been removed by the author.♠Naomi♠https://www.blogger.com/profile/13977544434749878625noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5420614271737977228.post-49415397576831515032009-02-18T10:43:00.000-05:002009-02-18T10:43:00.000-05:00Chapter 9 metaphor"You can't be a true beekeeper w...Chapter 9 <BR/>metaphor<BR/><BR/>"You can't be a true beekeeper without getting stung.<BR/><BR/>Naomi Rivas<BR/>Period 1♠naomi♠https://www.blogger.com/profile/16127510331510433568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5420614271737977228.post-26598825446180412052009-02-17T21:03:00.000-05:002009-02-17T21:03:00.000-05:00Vilmaris Gonzalezperiod12-17-09HYPERBOLE - "When w...Vilmaris Gonzalez<BR/>period1<BR/>2-17-09<BR/><BR/>HYPERBOLE - "When we had watered all the hives of tiburon and sprinkled enough sugar to cause a human being to gain fifty pounds, we drove home hot, hungry, and nearly drowned in our own sweat." <BR/><BR/>page 167 chapter 9 Last paragrapgh.♥Vivi♥https://www.blogger.com/profile/09333096802304126971noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5420614271737977228.post-43463169047819683342009-02-17T20:45:00.000-05:002009-02-17T20:45:00.000-05:00All good ones so far! Remember, though, simile is...All good ones so far! Remember, though, simile is spelled SIMILE, not SIMILIE.<BR/><BR/>Great job on your work here! It is FABULOUS!Mrs. Rodriguez, the teacher who loves you!https://www.blogger.com/profile/17485956616276227982noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5420614271737977228.post-55452913162964166532009-02-17T19:45:00.000-05:002009-02-17T19:45:00.000-05:00Imagery."It was concrete-block gray, with metal wi...Imagery.<BR/><BR/>"It was concrete-block gray, with metal windows and poor lighting."<BR/><BR/>the quote describes exactely how the jail loked like.<BR/><BR/>Mayara<BR/>Period # 1mayahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09741441754845708474noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5420614271737977228.post-60994291542476748082009-02-17T19:18:00.001-05:002009-02-17T19:18:00.001-05:00Diana Period 3,Simile,She looked so normal standin...Diana Period 3,<BR/><BR/>Simile,<BR/><BR/>She looked so normal standing there. For a moment none of us moved. *We watched her like we were waiting for the roof to cave in.*Diana :Dhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06231171787663669089noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5420614271737977228.post-54986278869160593762009-02-17T19:18:00.000-05:002009-02-17T19:18:00.000-05:00"She had held it tight,like a baby,and waited for ..."She had held it tight,like a baby,and waited for her lungs to fill."<BR/>Simile<BR/><BR/>Johana Macias<BR/>period 6JohanaMp2https://www.blogger.com/profile/01979207040184409335noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5420614271737977228.post-13141886289055530922009-02-17T19:13:00.000-05:002009-02-17T19:13:00.000-05:00"You only had to look at them to see how special t..."You only had to look at them to see how special they were, like hidden royalty among us."<BR/> Simile<BR/>Christian Reyes<BR/>P.6chrisrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00157997211341774870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5420614271737977228.post-35874636858161691652009-02-17T18:30:00.000-05:002009-02-17T18:30:00.000-05:00SimileIt swept across my face,smelling like the ri...Simile<BR/><BR/>It swept across my face,smelling like the river,like a piece of old wood that had gone moldy.<BR/><BR/>Luis<BR/>p#3Luishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16090364034742921910noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5420614271737977228.post-80017468434349241132009-02-17T17:52:00.000-05:002009-02-17T17:52:00.000-05:00This comment has been removed by the author.Luishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16090364034742921910noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5420614271737977228.post-41936831649196985572009-02-17T17:50:00.000-05:002009-02-17T17:50:00.000-05:00This comment has been removed by the author.Luishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16090364034742921910noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5420614271737977228.post-44050912440983602762009-02-17T17:34:00.000-05:002009-02-17T17:34:00.000-05:00" If this isn't the best smelling house in tiburon..." If this isn't the best smelling house in tiburon, I'll be a monkey's uncle" said neil, stepping insdie. <BR/>{hyperbole} <BR/><BR/>issis <BR/>period 6Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5420614271737977228.post-44160333096220482342009-02-17T15:53:00.000-05:002009-02-17T15:53:00.000-05:00Alliteration "I woke up with August shaking my sh...Alliteration<BR/><BR/> "I woke up with August shaking my shoulder, saying it was gonna be a scorcher,get up, we had to water the bees."<BR/><BR/> Ana <BR/> period: 1ana15https://www.blogger.com/profile/09396790843259219869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5420614271737977228.post-1800711737177288352009-02-17T13:28:00.000-05:002009-02-17T13:28:00.000-05:00This comment has been removed by the author.Mabithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09472294844684168526noreply@blogger.com